![]() ![]() ![]() While I get the intended impact of the image, it's meaningless to someone unfamiliar with the game and doesn't give a good idea of Dogmeat's appearance, which is what the infobox image is intended for. I really feel a better picture can be used for the article.Reading the sentences aloud may help with that, as it'll give you an indication if things can be improved upon, or cases in which grammar is incorrect (for example, the first sentence of the reception area). The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.Īlright I'm going to spare you the breakdown and get right to the point: the prose is a mess and direly needs a copyedit. This review is transcluded from Talk:Dogmeat/GA1. ![]()
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